Quiz 10.15.11

     I see a person who wants to be able to be like normal people and walk up stairs but he has a struggle and that is that he is in a wheel chair and cannot attempt at things by himself that walking people would be able to do. I can infer that he is not treated like a normal walking person because he has a dissability. I believe that is why he is stopped looking up at the stairs, he is looking for answers on how to become someone people will respect.

Compare/Contrast

                 Moon Dough Vs. Play Dough

     Many things are different about moon dough and play dough. For one, moon dough never dries out. Play dough on the other hand dries out pretty fast. Moon dough also is lighter and has a more airy texture to it while play dough is rubbery and thick. they are both for the same age group which would be ages three and older. While moon dough is a little messier it is easier to clean up because if you miss some it doesn't make much difference because you can just vacuum it up. Play dough needs all pieces picked up because the vacuum doesn't grip it and pull it in.

In Class Writing!

     A perfect world in my eyes would be very different. I would have my own condo or house, I would have a job, and my fiancee would be at least an E6 in the national guard and be making great money along with having a job as well. In reality I live with my mother, I have no job, and my fiancee is only an E3 and has no job at the moment. I want a 3 bedroom condo with 2 bathrooms and a walk in closet. With my fiancee being an E6 we wouldn't have any issues with money especially if he had a regular job as well. I would be going to school full time and have a part time job as well so that my fiancee could pay the bills and I would still be able to have necessities and wants. Living with my mom is difficult because she treats me differently than how I should be treated. She is way to hard on me because in her mind she only has a year and a half left to boss me around so that's what shes going to do to her fullest ability and its irritating. I want my own condo so that I can be able to do the things I want because I know I'm mature enough to make my own decisions now.

Two Teams- Pre Write

Steelers                              Vs.                          Cardinals
Pittsburgh Team             Football Teams                   Arizona team
6 Superbowl Wins         Both Liked By Many          0 Superbowl Wins  
7 Superbowl's                                                      1 Superbowl


Topic Sentence: The Steelers and the Cardinals are different because of there Superbowl wins, where there from, and how many Superbowl's they've been to.

Quiz- Online Vs Traditional Classes

     Online classes are much harder i think because you cant get one on one time with an instructor in person if you don't understand something. Although it is at your own pace and you can decide what to do that day and how long its going to take you to finish a class. Most people seem to take 4 weeks to finish a whole semester of class because you can take as long as you want or work through as fast as you want and you don't have to wait to find out what your doing next a couple days later, you can just move on to the next thing. I would much rather take a traditional class if its a science coarse math coarse or something hands on but if its english or history i would be okay with taking an online coarse.

InClassWriting(: / Homework

     This letter is to thank you for everything you do, mostly how you save many lives, have a lot of things to get donations, and you do walks to raise even more money. First, thank you for saving lives. My mom  is a 3 year breast cancer survivor and she wouldn't have been able to do it without you guys supporting her by finding a cure. You give so many people hope in having a longer life its magical. Second, you have so many things that get you donations. I like that you have jars in grocery stores and you have a product line of pretty much everything you could think of that also if bought a percentage goes to the foundation.Third, the walks and runs that you have raise so much money. Susan G. Komen Race for the Cure is a great thing you guys do by having a 10,000 dollar donation at the least for each person who walks. Also the smaller walks done at Tempe Town Lake for businesses to raise a certain amount of money is great too.

Natural Disasters

Having a natural disaster in Mesa is a bad thing. We have so many roads that would get shut down if there were a bad flood. No one that lives by any road that has dips would be able to go anywhere. School buses wouldn't be able to get to where there going and people who take the city bus would be outta luck too. without the transportation everything would be closed anything from grocery stores to malls to schools. you wouldn't be able to get to anything you'd need a vote.